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Have a topic sentence


If you tell readers what they’re going to read about, they’re less likely to have to read your paragraph again. Headings help, but they’re not enough. Establish a context for your readers before you provide them with the details. If you flood them with details first, they become impatient and may resist hearing your message. A good topic sentence draws readers into your paragraph.

We often write the way we think, putting our premises first and then our conclusion. It may be the natural way to develop our thoughts, but we wind up with the topic sentence at the end of the paragraph. Move it up front and let readers know where you’re going. Don’t make readers hold a lot of information in their heads before they get to your point.

Also, busy readers want to skim your document, stopping only for what they want or need to know. You can help them by giving each a paragraph a good introduction. Readers should be able to get good general understanding of your document by skimming your topic sentences.

A side benefit of good topic sentences (and good headings) is that they help you see if your document is well-organized. If it isn’t, topic sentences make it easier for you to rearrange your material.

Sources

  • Garner, Bryan A., Legal Writing in Plain English, 2001, University of Chicago Press, Chicago, pp. 65-66.

AUDIENCE

• Identify your audience and write to them
• Address separate audiences separately

ORGANIZATION

• Organize to meet your audience's needs
• Address one person, not a group
• Use lots of useful headings
• Write short sections

WRITING: Words

verbs
• Use active voice
• Use the simplest form of a verb
• Don't turn verbs into nouns
• Use "must" to convey requirements
• Use contractions when appropriate
nouns and pronouns
• Avoid noun strings
• Use "you" and other pronouns to speak directly to readers
• Minimize abbreviations
other word issues
• Use short, simple words
• Omit unnecessary words
• Dealing with definitions
• Use the same term consistently for a specific thought or object
• Avoid legal, foreign, and technical jargon
• Don't use slashes

WRITING: Sentences

• Write short sentences
• Keep subject, verb, and object close together
• Avoid double negatives and exceptions to exceptions
• Place the main idea before exceptions and conditions
• Place words carefully

WRITING: Paragraphs

• Have a topic sentence
• Use transition words
• Write short paragraphs
• Include only one issue in each paragraph

WRITING: Other

• Use examples
• Use vertical lists
• Use tables to make complex material easier to understand
• Consider using illustrations
• Use emphasis to highlight important concepts
• Minimize cross-references
• Design for ease of reading

TESTING

• Testing your Document
 
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